dragonclawsedw: Tip whatever of fanfic writing: In a serious story, please avoid horrible name puns....
dragonclawsedw: Example:
dragonclawsedw: "Well--Xenon; he's just my--wait, who's Helium?"
dragonclawsedw: Chlorine paused, confused.
dragonclawsedw: "Xenon, I know him, but who is the other boy? He is noble?"
Ryuugami: ...................
Ryuugami: XD
dragonclawsedw: BAD DUM BUM CHING!
WillBaseton: *THUD*
Ryuugami: *is actually amused by that*
NYWizrd2: But... are'nt they all just... Carbon based life forms?
WillBaseton: You'll notice that the names of some of the characters in my fic are names from TV and movies, but in name only.
Daien42: There's a character called Goku?
NYWizrd2: >_>' <_<;;
Daien42: or are you more on the lines of characters called Mr. T or Walker Texas Ranger?
dragonclawsedw: "Well, certainly you have a better idea than I do."
WillBaseton: Mr. Belvedere.
dragonclawsedw: ...halogen scum----
Daien42: Oh. =P
OMG Priam: Watch out, the lanthanides are coming!
OMG Priam: One if by N, two if by C....
dragonclawsedw: "Argon had been exceptionally easy to take, for a noble; much more so than the things he had heard about Neon"
dragonclawsedw: Here is said fic, it's rated R. Careful, I think Mistress Chlorine loses her electrons in it
dragonclawsedw: She gets "excited from her ground state" if you know what I mean...
OMG Priam: i sense a little valence...
dragonclawsedw: Oh no need to be so negative about it...
Ryuugami: *dies*
OMG Priam: But that's what makes it so attractive.
Ryuugami: x__x
OMG Priam: the audience seems to be polarized about it, though...
dragonclawsedw: True, it's a very charged piece....
OMG Priam: quite a gas.
dragonclawsedw: Fun for the whole group or family!
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Ryuugami: I alos suggest you post that to AIM convos
OMG Priam: you want to do it, kate?
dragonclawsedw: ...I think the chemistry puns frightened him off....XD

(fic in question: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=850916 )